We have been learning about expressing emotions by showing and not telling. We use our five senses and go into more detail about whats happening.
I like this writing because it shows someones feelings in an interesting way rather than saying something like "I am sad" which is boring so extending it and adding more unique words help make the writing more interesting.
What do you like about the writing? If you could write more what would you write?
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