WOW! Super cool presentatino. I think Goldilocks is a naughty girl who should never have gone into someone house with out asking. It was sad that she ate their food and broke some of the things. YKeep up your awesome writing. Mrs Tipelu
Kia Ora Chloe. I love how well organised your paragraphs are! I notice you are looking outside the box with you ideas, which is wonderful. Make sure to spell your words out fully. Example, "tho" should be "though".
WOW! Super cool presentatino. I think Goldilocks is a naughty girl who should never have gone into someone house with out asking. It was sad that she ate their food and broke some of the things. YKeep up your awesome writing.
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Kia Ora Chloe. I love how well organised your paragraphs are! I notice you are looking outside the box with you ideas, which is wonderful. Make sure to spell your words out fully. Example, "tho" should be "though".
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